January 04, 2004

FMS: collision

i've done the five minute story once before and thought, maybe i should give it another try. the word this time is collision. ready. set. go.

"If the only way for me to be with you is in my dreams then let me dream forever", he thought as reality crashed into his world with unimaginable force and fury. So much so that at times it was impossible to think and at other times it was impossible not to. Visions burst before him like fireworks on independence day. Voices in his head shouting her thoughts and guessing her thoughts mixed with his commentary.

It flows like the ocean, "You hold her in your arms instead of me... ", pounding his inner core, "She's your reason for living... ", like fierce waves crashing along the rocky cliffs, "and for wanting to die" as the sun sets.

geez, i didn't get much down in five minutes. *sigh*

Posted by ac at January 4, 2004 03:03 PM

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